I don’t know why this happens,
Unseemingly the worst
Owing to the
Words escaping into whispers;
Emotions evaporating unexpressed;
I don’t do it on purpose
I swear…
When I look at people,
Whom I love,
It slowly dawns on me,
Not to my surprise;
That their eyes are filled
With sheer contempt
I don’t know why
This has to be like this;
And here , I am
Writing this obituary,
For the dead love;
the cremated intimacy;
And mourning
in the futility
of my penned words…
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Written July 21st, 2004
A contest entry
- give me your sad, by lifelesslie.
340 points, ended August 19, 2004, 51 entries
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I Don't Know Why? by Apurva is beautiful poem expressing successfully. She endeavoured nicely with good words in her works. Actually, her attitude is semtimental and bright future. -
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Wow, This poem is slow and sad at the same time. It moves a person (me at least) to take the time to think of all the sadness that the world had to offer. Some eyes don't see any sadness and live haply but those eyes that see the sadness in this world or within our self. Can't so anything about it. Cheer up. Anyways. Great poem. Keep on writing. (Hindi shayari bhi kuch likhi ye.
) tc
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This is so sad-the picture is so befitting- I am only hoping it is not a personal write-this is very moving- -
great going and keep it up good luck alright
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