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Live 4 Eternity

I have found something wonderful,
the most precious thing of all,
it happened two months ago,
I answered God's sweet call.

I was lost in life's amazement,
and could never understand,
the secret of the universe,
the wonders of the land.

I read some words in a poem,
they spoke right to my heart,
the author was the sweetest man,
he gave me courage to start.

The search started in my mind,
I looked but did not see,
my dear friend was always there,
he did not abandon me.

Then I looked into my heart,
it felt strange to me,
my heart was full of God's love,
that my mind did not see.

My dear friend would pick me up,
as I stumbled to God's door,
he taught me not to be afraid,
I was not alone anymore.

I am no longer searching,
I've found a new home full of love,
I will live for eternity,
with God's love in Heaven above.

If you hear God's voice calling,
and he's asking you to choose,
let God's love fill your heart,
there's no way you will loose.

I found the secret of life.
the moment I found God's love,
the secret is you never die,
life never ends in Heaven above.







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I wrote this from a personal experience that happened to me recently, I found God, I am happy, I am home
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Written July 20th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    September 12, 2004
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    Thanks pozo,,yea he is a pretty good poet and a fine young man. Thanks for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
  • pozo
    September 12, 2004
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    A wonderful poem which I liked a lot, inspired by a wonderful poet as well as God Keep writing because this was fantastic, thanks for entering my contest

  • live4eternity
    July 21, 2004
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    WONDERFUL! Wow! It's so nice to see you write about God. You never know who YOU will have an effect on. You may not even know that you are making any difference, but you are. There is always someone watching you, always. You express God's love so well. You make me so warm Sandy with your kind words, they are so soft. Your poetry so just beautiful. Amazing!
  • kittyom
    July 20, 2004
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    beautiful

    this is really beautiful....I just got goosebumps!!!!.....very, very nicely written...I am so happy that you have found true peace....good luck in the contest....nice work.... ~~~~~~~Stephanie~~~~~~~~