Alone, in the silence, I laid
And then, disturbed, I could
hear the roars of the ocean
I saw myself
Defying the mighty waves
The more, the denial
More, the gigantic waves tossed me;
Drowning me in the unknown realms;
The more, I struggled in the futility
More entangled, I was
in the ambiguousness of the waters;
& I choked
Amidst what seemed like infinity
And in the transience of the moment,
I could listen the inaudible
Unraveling the mask of
Disguised silence…
Author notes
Well, not much to say...its silence that speaks.
Written July 20th, 2004
A contest entry
- Hey Dude, Come Be Obscure! by sock monkey.
300 points, ended July 21, 2004, 14 entries
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Wind of sea is to disguise us.,
Disguised Silence by Apurva poem is reflection of sea where her mind felt and found herself amidst there. She had whisper with wind and capturing sight over there. She wanted answer of own question, and in process to get it, composing this poem. -
Wow, if the contest wasnt looking for obscure poetry, I'd be completely lost! lol, this is very cryptic, and I love it!
Nice work
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good job!
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Quite satisfactoraly obscure.
Ambiguous waters! Ambiguous waters! Ambiguous waters! Great job, thanks for entering.
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