I'm falling from the sky
dreams flash before my eyes
some become truth, but most are still lies.
And all I now can think of is why?
Why isn't the dream reality?
and the reality a dream
why does awakening feel so mean?
how come I can't stay in my own reality?
Is there any way?
a way to make dreams come true
Some path to take to reach you?
to surpass the dreams?
a way to stay, or fly away?
I'd rather continue dreaming
than realising the truth
Understand you disappeared from my life
and left for another dream
leaving me guessing for the true meaning...
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written quite some time ago. don't quite remember when.
it was written in a time I was feeling a bit down in rememberance of a girl I used to love.
Written July 19th, 2004
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amazing
although this is only the second poem of yours i've read .. i'll jump the gun and say it's going to be one of if not my favorite by you. this poem is beautiful. sends shivers up my spine and tugs at my heartstrings causing misty eyes because that right now is what i'm going through.. i absolutely LOVED this -
Thank you very much for your caring and warm comments!
Been a while since I last received some inspiration, guess my life was kinda dull lately
This poem, was one I found when cleaning up my room, a small crumbled paper with a bunch of words and a small drawing written on it
So I guessed I could post this one as well with the new one
note to self: must check out your latest beauties ^_^
kisss 'n hugz
Fil -
sighs, Fil this is so typical of you, filled with such emotion longing sadness and love from the heart, depicted stunningly in this piece, you have a wonderful heart full of caring, yet full of Remembrance and longing. Stunning as ever, how i've missed your poetry and you, welcome back my friend
kisses n hugs
Luv Lau xxx
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