The first thing I decided to do when I woke up this morning was to read some of your poetry. I am now under several influences and tired but I feel that you'll be interested to hear exactly what I honestly thought. You know what? This poem reminded me of one of my good friends drunk when she's on her period, whilst making desperate attempts to hold a pen. I would ask you to improve this terrible mess but I fear the result may be even more disappointing. In the future, I shall avoid your futile attempts at pitiful mediocrity.
Author notes
Most scathing.
Written July 19th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Get Yo' Flame ON! (600 points up for grabs!) by starharbor.
300 points, ended July 27, 2004, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is truly wonderful, wonderful flow of words, detail is awsome . It sounds like some one might have a alcoholic problem.
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Lol, thanks - might be useful to check the contest for context.
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Lol, thanks.
Barbie. Xx
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Very comical! (she says eloquently as she ponders entering a contest on creative bashing critiques!)hehehe
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Lol, thank you. Barbie. Xx *Grabs points and runs*
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Lol, I didn't have any poem in mind! Aren't I lovely? Barbie. Xx It does actually suit quite a few of mine...
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don't hold back, say what you really mean. i think your poetry is so fine just like an apple stuck to my toe er i think my brain is hurting. lalalalala have some points
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err...hoping you didn't have any of my poems in mind when you wrote that? I can think of a few that would really invite that type of review
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Lol, thanks! Barbie. Xx
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hehehe that was scathing, all right!
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