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The Stereo Played Typical Music

What is a word if a world is not wrapped in it
What is a voice if it's song is not heard
What is true love if it's base is of lies
But the angles lie perfectly straight

If only
What if
Open eyes in your dreams
When the sky turns around
And the clouds start to speak

Two left shoes
Start to dance
The gray turns to gold
The wishing, the hoping all gone past the stars
And the bare soul is all that is left

Hands on hips
Shining through
The words like filled silhouettes
Colored out of the lines
In a world traced in black

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Written July 19th, 2004

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  • WordsRunRampid
    July 19, 2004
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    I may add more to this..it was just some random thoughts that turned into words.