Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Fear

Racing pulse,
Somersaulting heart,
Choking voice,
Gaping mouth,
Flushing face,
Dancing sweat,
Dilating pupils,
Trembling fingers,
Chilling spine,
The attacking gamut of fear!

Author notes

I dont know whether this applies well in context with this context but I put it here for I wrote this impulsively after watching a horror movie.
Written July 19th, 2004

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • madhavmool
    August 22, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    Fear by Apurva is symbolic poem expressing her ability to composing poems with her words mesmerizing us. Her poem may be best expression sources of fear as one renown philosopher J. Krishnamurti mentioned any form of fear is same fear. To this philosophy her poem fear may be good example.

  • a u r a
    July 26, 2004
    Edit | Reply

    applaudable

    VEry well described-very relating- an excellent job done!


  • mascararunning
    July 19, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    then i surely like it. it's very descriptive. very good job
    definatley fits
    thanx fer entering my contest and good luck
    toodles
    XxXxDannyxXxX