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Facsimilie Isn't Worth Shit

Fabricated drama hides your underlying issues within.
The real things surface when the fights begin.

What people don't understand is, everyone is the same.
We're all half-witted cheaters just out to win the game.

We're all stabbing eachother right in the back,
Because we see our weakness and blatant lack.

Because we believe in it, too, and we know what to do
to pull off the lie we all believe is true.

Don't think you're fooling anyone,
It's not like your Haloween has just begun.

And don't pretend you're innocent.
and don't forget all that time you spent

poring over what you wanted to be,
because you won't believe in anything you can't see.

Because they built you to be like that.
They never told you how shaky it is where your foundation was set.

Because they love the lie and the pain that comes with it.
Well I hate to break it to you but facsimilie isn't worth shit.

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Written July 18th, 2004

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  • syastriker7
    January 1, 2005
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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IM SPEECH LESS!


  • BillS2
    July 19, 2004
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    Straight to the heart

    Hi Pretzel:
    Long time since I have seen your writes. Wow, I sure don't want to be on the receiving end of this! I sincerely believe that you made your point to whoever it was directed to. You have laid down the cold, hard facts and left no room for doubt. Thank you for not directing it at me and welcome back. Bill