come here darling
sit next to me
in light we reach
the stars that set
us free
I once told you
you were beautiful
an angel on earth
you are
sensational
silent dear the moon
decides our fate
I just wanted to
tell you i love you.
letters that reach out
from a broken heart
shred the stars
that tear us apart
cling to life
to warmth that
exceeds
human need in
essence that
we breath
human need
who are we
to believe?
human need
who am i
to be free?
Author notes
Written July 18th, 2004
revised July 2007
A contest entry
- Hopeless Romantics by N.W. Clerk.
1200 points, ended September 6, 2008, 39 entries
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what a neat style you have with your work...entertaining and holds the readers attention..very good....freda
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this is simple, yet still rings of beauty..I think the simplicity adds to its charm.
very nice one.
~ Lea -
how cute... i liked this... its sweet.. Good job and God bless.
~tonya~ -
Wee typo, I think in the title...shouldn't it be heart? Other than that, I enjoyed the beauty in its simplicity.
~~~Val -
omg. im eating chocolate, and ur poem is about 20 times sweeter. so simple and beautiful .... man you're too good for the rest of us.
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