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Angelic Encounter

Your radiant cheeky  dimpled smile
alive on your soft perfect ivory skin
with flushes of pink
fused with your blazen fiery red hair
and your wide innocent eyes,
lit up my face
as you bounced across the room
with open arms
greeting me with a hug
but along the way
scattering
your purifying innocent energy
as an embracing force for all to enjoy.


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You will have many charming moments such as this to look forward to.  Congradulations on your baby boy!
Written July 18th, 2004

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  • Fionasmommy
    February 26, 2007
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    It's so sweet.It's a beautiful picture of a child. Good luck in the contest!

  • jma
    March 3, 2005
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    Your images are great, and you've infused the poem with a simular energy to that attributed to the child. This made it a very joyful, powerful poem.


  • angelica silver member
    August 6, 2004
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    very beautiful

    What a beautiful little boy he sounds like, some children just have that special glow around them don't they?~angelica


  • duana
    July 24, 2004
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    You got it, Maatkara. You got the full essence of what I was communicating through this poem!


  • Maatkara gold member
    July 24, 2004
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    Wonderful! There are some children who radiate that distinctive 'angelic' energy, they really grab your attention. There is no mistaking it when encountered. One always hopes their amazingly loving natures are carefully nurtured and fully appreciated, as all children should be.
    Lovely poem, Duana, the feeling vividly conveyed.

    ~ G


  • July 18, 2004
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    very light and wonderful poetry, i enjoyed the bouncing along the words. i used to be little once lol then i got breast fed and suddenly i was enormous

  • BrokenVanity
    July 18, 2004
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    I love this, it defiantely made me go "aw." Little kids are so innocent and angelic. Love this poem, great write.

    A. M. Adrian


  • July 18, 2004
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    Aww, beautifully written, how adoreable =o)


  • JenP
    July 18, 2004
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    Aw, this is sweet. It reminds me when I was little and used to run to my dad when he came home from work. Little kids makes us happy. Great job


  • July 18, 2004
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    Bravo!

    Beautiful. Completely brings back that moment when my boys see that their Daddy is home. Being greeted so enthusiastically, as if you are the most wonderful and perfect human on eath, is priceless. And pure.

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