As a baby our dreams are simple and new,
wrapped in soft blankets of pink or blue.
Sleeping so peaceful without a care,
Snuggling real close to their teddy bear.
As a child of ten you dream a bit more,
you dream of playgrounds and candy stores.
Your dreams take you on a rocket in space,
sometimes your dreams put a smile on your.
Teenagers dream of what their life will hold,
they dream of dating and feelings untold.
Meeting their first love is a dream come true,
And hearing the word, I really love you.
When you get married your dreams are for two,
having the same dreams makes it easy for you.
You dream of a family, and long happy life,
You dream of the wonders as husband and wife.
If you love each other and love God too,
you will have all your dreams come true.
It's wonderful to grow old with your true love,
and to know God is waiting in Heaven above.
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Written July 18th, 2004
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The flow is very well crafted. As is the rhyming scheme. I see my friend Mylee commented last and she is right. It's very comforting to know God is there.
Gabby -
Amen to knowing God is watching down on us from above!
well done
Mylee -
Sandy, I really loved this poem, it is so filled with beautiful truths.
Congratulations on winning Bronze
Take care and God bless
Elaine 
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This made me smile It is so sweet and I like how it goes up in the stages of life Thanks for entering my contest and good luck too
Rowena Jo -
I love this poem and it is so sweet.
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