Smiling,
Giddy, joyful souls
are bound in the ether
by silvery cords
woven from the purest love.
Transcending the vastness of space,
and swimming to Earth
they softly giggle,
and commence their dance
united,
in the gentle breeze
of a warm, summer evening
under moon and stars
that shine on them alone.
Dawn peeks shyly
over tangerine horizons
and in their eyes, sparkling radiantly:
the light of love,
to which the glow
of every winking star
pales in comparison.
Tangled in each others arms,
they descend into bliss
and whisper their secrets
as the heavens crawl
in orbit around them.
Author notes
Written July 18th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- ~HeLLaKeWL PoEtZ~ Second Group Contest by Lady Christian.
300 points, ended November 14, 2004, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I absolutely love it. Your title really opens up the possibilities here and the poem appoints many an understanding of different states of emotion. Well done, Tony.
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wow!! this is awesome!!! i...i...dont know what to say lol this is great! keep it up
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Oh WOW, Ark, this was truly a great piece. I loved the ending... as the heavens crawl in orbit around them Made me feel as if these two lovers were GODS and that all earth stood still. Like the the story Mallanaga wrote near the end of his life used to instruct young brides before their weddings. But it centers on The great God Shiva, terrible destroyer of worlds, and his wife, the beautiful goddess Parvati locked themselves away in their room in their palace on Mount Kailash while the white bull, Nandi, stood guard outside the doors. They were in there making love for over TEN THOUSAND YEARS...this book is also known as the Kama Sutra in case you didn't know. Yea this was really really good, ark.
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this is a nice sweet poem
details some great imagary of love
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A well written poem that flows well and paints a vivid picture. Gently sensual and I also love the peacefull quality of your words. A wonderful job. Keep up the fantastic writing. I loved reading it. ~Greeneyed Angel
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Imagery is strong as hell in this, which is probably my favorite side of poetry. And, at the same time, what you want to convey is not hidden by all the bells and whistles. Definitely a vivid potrait, which seems to write its own words that are easily picked out from all the sights. One of the best I read today
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here I was looking at a portrait more than reading a poem...beautifum images, very rich in words...congratz, I truely loved it...and the title....wwooww heavenly bliss...thanks!
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aww nice poem.
sorry...it will be short cuz i just saw a video from the ataris and i almost died cuz i was happy.lol
its a great poem.it's peaceful...wow!keep it up! -
great
whoa..this is beautiful..it had a very nice flow to it and it ending nicely..so this is good...i dont have any applauses left but i PROMISE tomorrow i'll apllaud this..ok??
bye 
Pooh
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Oh, I was in the most perfect place.
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sometimes love touches that soul that sings..
like chord that flies within the air..
echoing sweet melodies.
I did enjoy this!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill -
a pleasant surprise.
OH wOw!! this was kind of sensual to me! (then again that happens to one after a bottle of sake dosnt it?) It was So surreal and extra terrestrial. It was a very soft journey and you sustained a magical kind of eupthoric fealing steady like I.V. drips throught the entire thing. You must have been in a most beautiful place when yuo wrote this. -
excellent write!!
wow,ark that was beautious!! i loved it!!! what a creative and excellent poem you have written!! see i told you your writer's block would end,and look what you have to show for it,take a bow,you earned it!! this was fantastic!! loved the wording and flow,hugs NBF=
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