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Home At Last

Thank you God for saving me,
thank you God you set me free.
You gave your son so I could live,
my heart and soul to you I give.

All day long I've felt brand new,
since I gave my sins to you.
I love you my God, help me be,
a good Christian to serve thee.

I will do whatever you ask,
just show me Lord, I'll do the task.
I want to help you all that I can,
I may need help too now and then.

Now I have felt your loving touch,
my heart is happy, I love you so much.
I never felt this kind of love before,
It has consumed me since I opened your door.

It was wondrous to pray with my dear friend,
you put us together, so my heart could mend.
Thank you my God for this brand new heart,
not one moment of the day will we be apart.

I'm not good at saying the way I feel,
but in my poetry my feelings are so real.
My poetry has been a gift from you,  
so Lord I write this poem to say thank you.
 










Author notes

Thank you Jason for showing me the way home.
This is apoem I wrote last week when I was saved , a poet on allpoetry. live4eternity led me to God.
Written July 17th, 2004

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  • el desdichado
    September 16, 2004
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    My poetry has been a gift from you,
    so Lord I write this poem to say thank you.

    I love the idea here...the words being "a gift", the poetry being a vehicle for this...
    what I mean is, this poem just shines...it's inspirational, it's brave, it's honest. full of faith, full of power. it's clear that you genuinely BELIEVE in everything that you're saying, and i think that that's the most important thing that the poet needs to do when writing a poem. Having that conviction. That's what makes writing literature and creating art so empowering. Thank you very much for entering my contest.

  • hereonearth
    July 27, 2004
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    That's awesome! You are glorifying Our Lord through your poetry and giving it all to Him. That's AWESOME. Thanks so much for sharing! THanks for entering and good luck!

  • live4eternity
    July 17, 2004
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    And there's not one thing of all evil forces and all of Satan's devils or Hell's angels or even Satan himself can do to drown out a single word. There's not one thing Satan can do about your salvation. No man can take away God's love for you and no evil. How glorious. Praise God. Thank's to Jesus. Halleleua. I can see you hit home. You will always be with us in our hearts Sandy. Beautiful poem!

  • Dropp Deadd
    July 17, 2004
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    aww good job!