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Gas Station # 3

After wasted years, and masturbation,
preps will work at the local gas station.
With hand in pants and hand on hose,
He'll stay on the path that he chose.
In high school he seemed to just peak early,
while I got a wedgie, beat up, and a swirly.
Yet now that karma has taken it's round.
Those gosh darn preps hear the vroom vroom sound.
The cars will speed by with little care,
to the prom kings and best what ever from way back where.
It's not that they get what the deserved.
To quote a famous movie, They got Served.

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kind of on the edge of acceptable... but I have strong feelings.
Written July 16th, 2004

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  • Prayer of a Realist
    July 18, 2004
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    Ha well its nice to think thats how all the asshole preps at school will end up but most of them are so goddamn rich their parents will be able to buy them a job. Well at least thats the case at my school. Nice work the rhyming was good