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numb

Here I am again, left behind
Stuck alone with my fucked up mind.
I want to cry,but the tears won't come,
It's like being frozen, totally numb.

Want to feel,but to weak to try,
Just today I said my last goodbyes.
Away I go to a place unknown,
Maybe light will shine where darkness has shown.

Author notes

I am not suicidal. I was at one time and this is how I felt. I feel alot better now,and I'm glad I didn't do it!
Written July 16th, 2004

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  • DreamGirl8390
    September 17, 2004
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    hey mom this is really good. i never got to read it till now. love you always and forever.
    sara

  • Dark Angel713
    August 31, 2004
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    wow! sherry i love this one its really good! love ur baby julie wen am i comeing too see u LOVE JULIE


  • NakedFairy629
    July 16, 2004
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    This is a really good poem.
    You are a gifted writter with lots of hidden talents you need to let shine through.
    You are a great friend and a great mother.
    I love you Sherry, Dearly.
    Love
    Kristin smoochies! oxoxox