What did I do? Why are you yelling at me? You and her were fighting this had nothing to do with me! I guess I don’t understand, help me out here. Sometimes I just don’t feel good enough for either of you. It is like if yall are having a bad day, I have to have a good one otherwise it’s just too much negativity. Well maybe you are wrong. Maybe it is me who shouldn’t be treated this way. You know…. you don’t have to pass your harsh, distorted thoughts on to me. Deal with it in a healthy way, I did nothing to you. Just leave me alone. Don’t talk to me. I’m not the one with a problem, you’ve got to calm down. Put your daughter before your stupid needs and aggravation. I’ve tried, but now I’m confused. At first I thought I was wrong, then I blamed you, but now I guess it is my fault. I tried… I really did, but I guess it just wasn’t good enough, not this time.
-Krystal Kerney-
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um... This is just something that crossed my mind a minute ago when my parents were yelling at me. It may seem a bit extreme, I guess my emotions just got the better of me today... yea, my day hasn't gone well either, this is just kind of the thing that set me off.
KK
Written July 16th, 2004
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Hey I know how you feel. I get like that sometimes with my parents. Just remember when you get like that take it to God, he'll lift it if you just ask him.
~Alexia~
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Hey, God is a God of mercy!! God is a God of Love!! Just keep your eyes focused on Him and always look above!! Keep your faith and never Doubt!! Cuz Praise God is what life is all about!! I am blessed to meet another Christian on here!! I can't wait to keep meeting more!! God is just so awesome and the most important person in my life!! I am on my way to read more of your poetry!! God Bless You!!
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You should never doubt yourself. If I am correct you always say "Keep your head held high". Well..... you are a great writer. You shouldn't let your parents get you down. I know your family means a lot to you and you really love then but you, are you. Nobody else. You are strong in so many ways to be held back and put down by so little of things. They might not seem little to you but you don't see the strength I see in you. You can go far in life. Never let the light in your eyes and heart die, for it will lead you to your eternal happiness. You have the strength and the will, now all you have to do is see that in yourself. Good luck. You have my hope and determination that you can be strong through anything. I know you can do it. - Sorrows
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Hey good job on this one. yeah i know exactly how you feel about when parents yell at you. It kinda drives ya crazy. Well i know that it does me. lol But hey keep up the great job!! -
it's an interesting piece. I like it. It's different but it works. And if really expreses what it's like to be a teenager.
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Great write, really emotional but sometimes it helps to explode like that and it's better on paper then anywhere else. Keep it up and stay strong
Romeo
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Thank you for your prayers and gracious comment. Things are a bit better now. Somewhat rough around the edges, but hey, no one is perfect right? I know it wasn't my fault for the reason they were fighting but then it was like I added to it and made things worse without ever meaning to. Anyways, thank you again, and I'll try to check out some of your work!
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Great
I am sure that these are the thoughts of many kids, but they just can't express it. You have spoken well for yourself and all the others. It is hard being a kid and having parents fighting and screaming, it causes them to think it is their fault and some just can't deal with it.I pray things will improve for you.Great work and God Bless! -
Thanks gurly, I wrote this shortly after getting off the phone with you earlier this afternoon... I know you could tell something was wrong, but i guess this was the only way to discribe it. Thanks for everything. I know you are here for me and I really appreciate it.
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Hey gurly..
Well to start off you know I'm always here fo you. I'm sorry your day didn't go well. I hope you have a better one tomorrow. I know it's hard when your parents are fighting. I wish you the best of luck. I really like this poem. It expresses your emotions clearly. Great job on it! Well like I said if you need me just hit the digits.
Angela
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