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Confusion

"As we lie"
We don't forget
As we lie
We never met

"As we lie"
You wrote the book of love
As we lie
God is above

"As we lie"
Finland sucks!

Author notes

This has a very deep meaning. Trust it or I'll trust it for you!
Written July 16th, 2004

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  • Karen Michelle
    August 29, 2004
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    Yes I agree with mellilot. This poem started off pretty normal... and quite sweet and then that last line came and it was like, whoa! I'll trust it though


  • mellilot
    July 16, 2004
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    how very very odd... um... yes-
    I think more explanation is needed though... even if you just IM, I'm curious now...

  • danamarie7685
    July 16, 2004
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    Trust it for me!
    Pssh yeah like you can pull that off
    Good luck...
    You just insulted all Lobster - Mummies from Finland