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Representation

I hear the alarm beep
I am awake
I walk down the stairs
I am awake
I eat my bowl of cereal
I am awake
I go back to bed because it is much to early to be awake since it is 3:30 in the morning
I am awake










Author notes

This has very deep meaning
Written July 16th, 2004

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  • danario
    July 16, 2004
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    i am really confused. it had a cool sound. but i guess i don't see the deep meaning either... oh well. it is cool anyway.

  • danamarie7685
    July 16, 2004
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    Woah...you are right... thats deep kid.
    This totally blew my mind...
    AMAZING
    This poem has completely changed my outlook on life.
    The line 'I am awake' really stuck out to me like REALLY stuck out to me... REALLY...
    Brilliant...just brilliant!

  • Open Eyes
    July 16, 2004
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    who sets the alarm clock for 3:30 in the morning, eats cereal and goes back to bed? the deep meaning eludes me, but i like