With folded wings and a silenced beak
No words of love the eagle speaks
When you left all nature knows
A broken heart it has now bestowed
The mockingbirds voice is now so still
It has felt some pain and lost its will,
The soft white dove now just mourns
From a heart with pain and torn
The will weeps with her head bowed low,
Like the brook beside it the tears now flow;
The ocean is vast it's waters so blue
Remind me how i once loved you,
The sun the moon, once shined so bright
But now that your gone they have lost their light,
The kittens sleep without a purr,
Faded love is just now a blur
Nature hears the mornful song
Please come back where you belong
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Written May 30th, 2002
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loveme
As I read, I can hum out a song.
Your beats and rhyme are just so fine.
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Wow great write just lovely. thank you for your nice comment on my poem "put me down" keep up the great work.
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don't touch it!
The silence of the wooded glen,
Speaks of things that might have been,
And like the tree I bend so low,
The weight of loss torments me so.
But loss is part of natures way,
Come back to me again some day.............Just lovely darlin I hope this isn't from real life. best to you. -
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Beautiful... Even the sad nature in this can not take from the beauty which you display here!! -
excellent
ok, i'll come back. but, only if i can put my feet on the furniture, but only then.
:0)
Nam -
excellent
Very nice Susan.. amazing how things change when we are sad and lonely...
Barbsx
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