She strolled along completely nude
Upon her form my eyes were glued
A smiling, shouting, happy dude
I am no prude, I am no prude
I did not think her actions lewd
But to my wife it caused a feud
She said, how could you be so crude
My goose was stewed, my goose was stewed.
Author notes
Monotetra.One or more Quatrains.Each line 8 syllables.Last syllable in each line rhymes.Last line four syllable phrase repeated.
Written July 16th, 2004
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Lol, this would be me and my boyfriend. Thanks for this entry it gave me a laugh tonight. Good luck in the contest hun and in everything you do. Keep up the great writing.
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Omg.
This is so funny, and fits my picture so well!
I love this :]
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I like it. I didn't pee but I did fart between stanzas.
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This was quite amusing, poems like this are rare. I have recently noticed that most poems in the humor category do not have a form to them. They are not a specific kind of poem other than either free form or rhyming. This was quite interesting. Thank you for entering it into my contest and good luck.
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good
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HAHAH!! This was great...I love the flow, and the final line had me laughing...gotta love it! Great job, and good luck in the contest!
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Ok. Although I would love to see what she did to stew your goose...I won;t ask for a 3rd stanza because I would just pee my pants laughing! Funny stuff.
I think you better keep your eyes on the road your walking down and not on the horizon next time.
LOL
Jen -
terrific
so you cooked your goose, and got caught, LOL this really a cute little poem, that gave us a peek at your cleverness.
Write on!......Ennovy -
HA HA HA This is really cute and too funny!! Your rhyme was there and so was a nice even flow of the words...
Your goose was stewed??? Funny!!
Good luck in the contest!!
Smiles
your way >>>>Sandy 
San-d
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WOW...what a great write, beautifully done
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Wow!! I'm at awe in your humor lol. Haley27
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hehe this is v funny! worked great with this form too, i really like it. good work and good luck. xdwyx
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lol
where on earth did you get the inspiration for this one it's really hilarious indeed 
I wish you the best of luck in this contest!
Leander -
good
this is really cute, and true to life. What man could resist but to look. and what wife could but get angry?
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This one really made me laugh. Interesting form, I've never heard of it. I love the first stanza Very cute. Thanks for the laugh and smiles, its a nice way to start a day. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in my contest
~Lana
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This is very cute. I had forgotten about this little form. Thanks for the giggles and good luck in the contest.
~Lyrical
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haha... cute
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galfalfa.Thanks muchly for the sage advice and the applause.
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A very clever write -the flow was excellent!
To your wife you should have said
I may be old but i'm not dead
Enjoyed this .
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I love your poems Bill, you are so funny!
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haha. thank you for making me laugh!!!
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LMAO. it definately brought smiles to this face.
a fun and cute write.
Wellpenned.
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::giggles:: that was amusing,good poem
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