Cold silver blade
let me march with death's parade
cut me nice and deep
put me in eternal sleep
let all my blood pour out
find my cold stiff body and shout
i'm giong to do this
just let me cut once more
find me lying on the floor
i'll cut an artery or two
all this pain built up in me is through
when I slice with the cold silver blade
I'll be marching with death's parade
you can't stop me, this is my plane
I'm tired of it all
you've sat and watched me fall
you've sat and watched me cry
cold silver blade cut me one last time
now sit and watch me die
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Written July 15th, 2004
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Great! You used awesome descriptions, and obverall you described the setting very well. These lines especially:
when I slice with the cold silver blade
I'll be marching with death's parade
you can't stop me, this is my plane
I'm tired of it all
you've sat and watched me fall
you've sat and watched me cry
very creative and wel written! *claps for you* -
wow. that was really really superly great!!! lol. yeah i also got a lot of cutting poems. i stopped. cuz yeah, long story. anyway...GREAT piece!!
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love this. i have a ton of poems and what not about cutting. i do not do it anymore...but i don't want to come off as if i think there's anything wrong with it. i'm not a better person because i don't do it anymore...i'm just a different one. if anything, i think self mutilation is a good way to fight off your feelings. but maybe that's just my twisted little mind...idk. anyways...beautiful poem, love. don't cut too deep...i'd hate for the world to lose a talent like yours.
...muchlove... RIKKA
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