She was tall,
tan,
and tempting.
she was sexy.
and seductive.
She had beautiful,
blond hair,
and blue eyes.
She had luscious lips,
and voluptuous hips.
and the way she dressed,
was kinky.
She hit the needle,
and all was lost.
She looked anorexic,
and had tract marks.
She was always shaking,
and couldn't stop the itch.
Her face was pale,
and cadaverous.
You may have seen her,
just walking around,
the streets of L.A.
Dirty, bawdy,
and malnourished.
When she would walk by,
you would smell the,
putrid and rancid smell.
She may not have lived long,
but while she lived she had her fun.
Author notes
Written July 14th, 2004
A contest entry
- Lost your Love(about death) by LaAmyaArlene.
300 points, ended August 3, 2004, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this was a really good write. i liked the word choice. you used a lot of really intreging words, which is awesome! one thing?
"would would smell the," umm... confused? lol.
but other than that this poem was really well written i hope you win! -
Intresting, thanks for entering
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Interesting
.....okayy...not really sure i wanna know about this one tim...lol...uh good rite...wierd...but good...<3
~Holly~
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