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I want to walk through the roses.
I'll feel no prick or sting.
True love's approach closes.
I want to walk through the roses.
I won't heed what love exposes.
Take flight on danger's wing.
I want to walk through the roses.
I'll feel no prick or sting.

Author notes

This is a french form known as the Triolet.  I hope you enjoyed it.
Written July 14th, 2004

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 24, 2006
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    Very good write. Its short but still a great write nonetheless.

  • Gnomestress
    July 14, 2004
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    As stated in my comments, this is a french form called the Triolet. It's a very fun form to write with.


  • Catressa gold member
    July 14, 2004
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    oh it was so pretty , I am no form expert I have no idea on any of them , all I know this was very nice , and short sweet . good job , be safe catressa


  • dottedmyeyes
    July 14, 2004
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    very pretty. unique symbolism. i like this poen because it was short and sweet. ummm lest see what else... the rhyme was very interesting.... is it a certain style or form or is it your own? if its ur own im impressed.

  • dryiceburns
    July 14, 2004
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    this was short and sweet. nice rhyme, and straight and to the point. good job


  • Jr Poet
    July 14, 2004
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    aww i love it
    i'm in shock
    keep it up
    wow
    jr. poet

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