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For Joe...

 



I know that things have been rough

 

And life’s been filled with pain

 

I know we’ve often stumbled

 

Down a rocky lane

 

But I’d not give up one second

 

On even the steepest road

 

If it meant not having you here

 

To help me share the load

 

Lately it seem the rocks are high

 

That we must overcome

 

And the path so heavily littered

 

That we just want to succumb

 

Till I see you there beside me

 

Love shining in your eyes

 

There is noting quite so magic

 

It’s then I realize…

 

Everyday God gives me a blessing

 

While you are in my life

 

Every moment, I am lucky

 

As long as I’m your wife

 




Patricia Gibson-Williams

 

July 14, 2004

Author notes

I wrote this for Joe's birthday.  It wasn't exactly what I set out to write, so I'm hoping he likes it.  I plan to give it to him tonight.  Please tell me if you see any typos or have any suggestions.  ~ Patti ~
Written July 14th, 2004

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  • -Joey- silver member
    July 24, 2004
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    ohhh myyy and until the end I was all moshy feeling inside my birthday is in the fall LOL well its still nice reading mooshy stuff even if its to a different joe LOL, hope it was as happy as you wished for him, as well as for you
    sincerely,
    joe


  • July 18, 2004
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwww That was such a pretty poem, I could feel what you felt when you typed these words down, keep up the great work and never let anyone ever tell you, you cannot write cause you can. I loved this poem. Jennette Miller

  • Morgana
    July 14, 2004
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    I love this poem. It relates to a friend of mine. He's going through some stuff right now being separated from his girlfriend because of circumstances beyond their control. I can imagine him saying these things to her (other than the last bit lol)...very emotional write filled with love and hope. I liked it!

    -morgana


  • PoemsOfALifetime
    July 14, 2004
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    AWWW, this poem is so good. It is filled with great emotion and a very heart felt message. You can truely read how much you love this person. I hope that you have happiness for a long time. And that nothing mut good times find you. The rhyming and flow is great. The word just stand out there. Keep it up!