How long does a Frienship last?
Be it now, or from the past.
Does it stick around forever?
Or float away with the wind,
Like a Feather.
How long does a Friendship last??
How long does a Frienship last???
Does it die and whither away?
Like green grass in spring,
In summer turns to hay.
If so, How slow, How fast?
Oh How long does a Friendship last????
How long does a Friendship last?????
Is it a surety? Like the sun;
A shadow always cast?
Or will a cloud get in the way,
Taking our Frienship away?
Oh How long does a Friendship last??????
Oh How long will our Friendship last?
Dan Young...Usagold
Author notes
This write was inspired by a newly found friend of mine.. may the answer to this question simply be...FOREVER.
Written July 13th, 2004
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thank you all for being Honest with your critiques and comments....as you can se I can take and do use your input well..tanks again...Dan
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"Like green grass in summer,
In winter turns to hay."
- Isnt it the other way around? in summer grass turns to hay (dry conditions) and then when it is winter the grass is really green from the rain.
hmmm just the thought
overall good poem
Catch
Katie
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Seems like a short song. To answer the question, I think a real one should last a lifetime. Flaws: "Frienship" should be "friendship", leave feather lower case, and all friendships should be lower case too, use a single question mark, "whither" means where so you mean "wither", all hows should be lower case. Anyways, I hope your friendship lasts as long as you both want it to- you and whoever this is written for.
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thats a good question. is there really an answer to it? idk but they can last for ever and some can end within a yr sometimes shorter.great job
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