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Soulful Visions

SOULFUL VISIONS

Look deep my friend you will see,
what will become my destiny.
There are glimpses of my fears,
they depict my painful years.

Look past the green in my eyes,
see the tears as my love dies.
As my eyes look back at you,
a vision of you, stays here too.

My eyes allow light into my soul,
see all my lifetime goals.
See the sorrow hidden inside,
all the things I chose to hide.

The sun reflects deep into my eyes,
births, deaths, tearful goodbyes.
My soul is nourished by what I see,
my soul controls my destiny.

Look into my eyes past the glare,
be real still, you have to stare.
Deep inside my soul struggles to live,
it have nothing left to give.

I need to see something good and kind,
something to sooth my soul and mind.
You search my eyes like an open book,
my eyes are tired, take your last look.

 

 

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Written July 13th, 2004

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  • MoonStarRaven silver member
    June 2

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    This is so beautiful yet sad I loved the imagery and flow in this poem. Very well written and heartfelt!


  • Samplette gold member
    June 2

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    Wow...five years ago you penned this. Your talent has only improved over time, and as always, a pleasure to read your work. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam


  • PurpleSky
    June 2
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    I think this is beautiful written with a hint of sad undertone to it. The picture definately gave this piece extra substance but this piece could very easily stood all on its beautiful own.Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you!
    huggles
    Lena


  • movedon
    May 12, 2008

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    A strong flow, moved along nicely. It held my attention, which is hard to do Thanks for the great read
    Mylee


  • Forlorn Dreams
    November 12, 2006
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    this is wonderful, and it flows great. its very deep and explains so much. what i got from this is your afraid of the future because all you can see is your past, which held pain and tears. and how your afriad to open up to anyone because you afraid of rejection? sorry if thats wrong, but thats one of the many things i got from this poem. you did a wonderful job. keep up the great work
    Kelcey


  • angelgirl
    February 21, 2006
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    sandy that was a beautifuly written poam.I like your style.
    great piece keep up the great work.
    your ap friend lynn


  • live4eternity
    July 16, 2004
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    WOW, what a wonderful poem. This is a very intelegent write. I love how you say, "You search my eyes like an open book,
    my eyes are tired, take your last look.", that is just completely brilliant! Way to go!

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