What does the Writer want?
Thats easy to be said.
Because words come from the Heart,
Not really from the head.
Be it a long story,
Or just a one line quote.
The writer wants you to Understand,
Exactly what he wrote.
So when you read my works,
Read them several times.
For you can find my Heart,
Hidden in my Rhymes.
Sometimes they may be funny,
Sometimes they may not make sense.
Sometimes I like to keep,
My readers in Suspense.
So go ahead and read,
Until you too can see.
That all of my writes,
came from the Heart of me.
So SMILE because I Love You,
SMILE because I Care.
SMILE because with my Words,
It's my Heart, with you I Share!
SMILES AND HUGS TO ALL
Dan Young....Usagold
Author notes
Written July 13th, 2004
A contest entry
- Open contest for everyone by Miss Belligerence.
300 points, ended July 22, 2004, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was a very true poem. I've never really thought of writing like this but it's true. I really liked it. good luck in my contest and thanks for enetering
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Very well composed, I'm sure we can all relate to this as writers. My only suggestion would be to leave nouns lower case unless you mean to emphasize them, and to use apostrophes. I like how you name your different styles... I think most of us have at least two styles of writing. Thank you for sharing this poem and your talent.
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once again great, i enjoy your work although you may not enjoy mine things from the heart are different and yeah.my writing is dark, sad, but some of it is not,keep writing, my fellow poet.
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