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Not for Me

He lives in Broken Lovers wake.
His heart I fear will break in two.
My silence is for his own sake,
if I tell him of my love for you.
His heart deceives him, he can’t see,
The clarity of your love for me.

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Written July 13th, 2004

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  • memo3
    November 26, 2004
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    Wow nice write here. It's small but complex. I had to read it over twice. I'm sure he'll see it sooner or later Awsome write and keep up the good work.

    jason