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Behind The Mirror

Constructs of
silent shiftings
into the dark
glass glancing
toward the
vanishing point
in the reflexion
where Here and There
stand eternally
opposed opposite
to meet where
recollections
play their
trump cards
closing off at
the nearest end
and widening at
another Here
another Now

Author notes

This is a little dash of surreality, a little mystery to make life less humdrum.
Written July 13th, 2004

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  • beccab
    April 6, 2005
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    haha..humdrum.. this is good it's kind of random it seems like something that I would write if I were trying to get rid of writer's block.. but this is good! good