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Memories Within The Flow

locomotives screaming through the Colorado mountains
as they smile through the steam
what tales they could tell
an imagination runs through one's mind
as the memories flow
an adventures where some explored
the mysteries
through the west
where most just lived their lives
yet as we see it
what could be more grander
than living the life
where one touched beyond danger
yet somehow escapes
without a scratch
and lives to tell
what befalls.

July 10, 2004

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Written July 13th, 2004

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  • Thoughtful Seeker
    July 19, 2004
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    sensational

    wow,nice write,i love the word locomotive,nice word,makes me think of my small town,and all the trains that were there!! i really enjoyed reading this,it was descriptive and creative,and very you!!! that's why i love it,hugs poetic janis/NBF


  • Fantine
    July 13, 2004
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    This brought back soooooooooooooooooo many memories! I just moved from Colorado Springs and I miss it so very much. Thanks for the reminder of it's grandeur, history and beauty!