How do you
still
surprise me every time;
still
give me tingles
still
make me feel divine
still
let me hold your heart
still
have such a grasp on mine
still
call me your sweetheart
still
treat me like a queen
still
stay so sweet and kind
still
tell me everything
still
make me gasp aloud
still
make me feel so special
still
make me so proud
still
tell me every day
how much you love me
how much I love you
still
Author notes
Alright, this is crap, I don't like it, but gimme a break...and advice
Written July 12th, 2004
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loved it.
damn. i wish i had that. that was very well written. it has a great flow throughout it. im still thinkin it all through (haha im so funni, i used still and thats the name of your poem!) yeah that was stupid but anyways, once again, loved it. keep writing! -
awwww, isnt that sweet
hmmm, dont know what to say about this one except that i like it
its really good, i think it flows well
Great Write Lisa
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