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Waiting

GOD IS CRYING TODAY

 

God is crying,it rained toda.
Another soul has lost his way
Raindrops fall from his eyes
I'm the one, I made him cry

Didn't stop, rained all night
I don't see an end in sight
So many souls lost like me.
Lost in a sea of misery 


As I hear the raindrops fall
Is today the day I get a call
Is it Gods voice I hear
Is he close, is he near

Once again doubts creep in
Another day, God did not win
I have tried with all my heart
My mind keeps God and I apar.

How will I know it's God I hear
How Will I know he is there
I started writing poems of love
Now I write of heaven above

My dear friend, he's been so kind.
He say to let God in my mind.
I get more frustrated each day.
I don't know what else to say.



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Written July 12th, 2004

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  • theXmadXhatter
    October 17, 2007
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    This is such a sad poem. "Lost in a sea of misery "<-- that is my favorite line. God does give us a choice and does get sad when we choose the wrong one. It's okay to be speechless. God loves you always.
    love always and forever, marissa rae


  • live4eternity
    July 17, 2004
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    That's OK! Just as you would have a very close relationship with a friend, if you are frusterated with eacother, or have some kind of differences, you would tell eachother, because you love eachother. It's the same way with God, Jesus wants youi to be honest with Him. It's ok to be speechless! There is nothing we can do to make God love us more or less and there is nothing we can do to impress Him. We can only make Him happy! Let me tell you, you are making Him happy!