you're still sitting in the dark
i thought i turned on the light
the sniper's about to hit his mark
you become a bird in flight
flying away to a broken home
you told me you life story
telling me things i've never known
shining in your mid-air glory
but how many pieces does it take
to fix this lost puzzle here
all the parts you find are fake
just like everyone you hold dear
so keep on running that way
until the sun finally rises
now she's seeing the light of day
there will be no more surprises
Author notes
Look, I rhymed. Hopeful and sad. What a combonation.
Have fun.
Written July 12th, 2004
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I really liked this. It's very very good! You are right that it is hopeful and sad at the smae time but while others might have not done so well at that you did wonderfully! I just really liked this.

