I wait at the Airport for your plane to land
I'm so excited,we'll meet for the first time.
Will you find me appealing? will you be too?
I look at the clock, my mind races
Am I alright? my hair in place? my lipstick on?
I am nervous,excited, seeing you, holding you,
touching your face I have gazed at so long.
The plane! It is landing, oh, I am nervous,
I gaze at a face, no, that's not you!
searching the crowd our eyes meet, it’s you!
Instantly we recognize each other.
We walk forward, eyes locked together
you smile, we walk faster, I am running,
into your arms, to be held by you
my love, you are here, at last, my love!
my honey, my sweet love, hold me close
We kiss, so much love I feel for you.
We have waited so long for us to meet
you gaze with so much love in your eyes
It takes my breathe away.
we walk towards the exit, laughing, talking
a wonderful time we'll have,
I will cherish the memories of our love.
I wake, it was a dream, a fantasy,
will it ever happen?
One day it will come true, we'll meet!
For it's written in the stars.
Author notes
this is the greatest love of my life
This is my second favourite as my first favourite won GOLD
Written July 12th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- A comp for my favourites and those who have me on their favs list only by dp robertson.
789 points, ended November 16, 2004, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Just a dream that could never happen Jan, too much has happened to us since then, too many hurts and tears. Memories are all I have now.
Jenn
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excellent
My movie script is exactly this but with a twist. LOL
Great poem Jen..Did you have some lush guy in mind???LOL
Hugs
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Great writing, I see why you like it- interesting subject too
David -
Very beautiful fantasy of meeting your soulmate, it does not hurt to have them, we all do that's what makes life interesting~Love~Joan
Edited on Jul 26, 11:37 p.m. because ''. -
Having married the woman I met online I have had this exact experience – for real; but it was not very much like this… I think this must be the chicks’ version… ouch! But good luck in the contest anyway!
Edited on Nov 08, 4:46 p.m. because ''. -
you got it sam LOL some imagination hey
I should've called it that 
Jennifer
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A beautiful love poem jennifer. A wonderful read. Love at first flight...
Sam
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Thank you David for including me in your list-jennifer
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Beautifully Penned and Timeless
Your song touched me so deeply
This was the first time I've shed tears within the divines minds eye
In a long long time
This heartfelt song reminds me of my lover once upon a time
This is the feeling that comes to mind when I read your poetry divine
I really wanted to try
To make a life for you and I
But so much time has passed
And I sip my sherry glass
Now I‘m back in reality
I guess you were a dream for me
But maybe someday I‘ll see your smile
And once again, we can laugh awhile
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that is os sweet and romantic....but in a way its a little strange but thats okay...everything in my world is strange.
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Wow. I love this one! It's playful, yet romantic. It can really capture the spirit of a virtual relationship
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This is a beautiful poem and I liek the scene taht you set with the airport and the feelings of nervousness, anticipation and wonder at what the other person will think of you. If it's written in the stars then it's surely meant to be. A lovely poem and well done.
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Nice write.
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so excited,we'll meet for the first time.
Will you find me appealing? will you be too?
I look at the clock, my mind races
Am I alright? my hair in place? my lipstick on?
I am nervous,excited, seeing you, holding you,
touching your face I have gazed at so long.
The plane! It is landing, oh, I am nervous,
I gaze at a face, no, that's not you!
searching the crowd our eyes meet, it’s you!
Instantly we recognize each other.
We walk forward, eyes locked together
you smile, we walk faster, I am running,
into your arms, to be
nice part in this pooem
u kno i like the way u adrees this peom u are good in fact best -
This is really nice. I especially love the last line. You had a nice flow with this and it's just a nice emotion. Nice job
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, maybe that would happen to us too, that's why it's better to remain a fantasy, if you read "searching for you" you will see I've searched for him all my life, I knew my soul mate was comming~Jennifer
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I can so relate to this! I'm in the midwestern US, my boyfriend is in England. When he came here for the first time, it was a lot more awkward between us than in your poem though.
This is a beautiful poem, it nearly brought a tear to my eye. Very nice flow to it, great descriptions! 
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great write! flow was perfect. keep writing
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thank you for your comment sweetlala, if you dream long enough it will happen-Jenni
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Thank you for your wonderful comment sadie
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Awe, my bf lives in NJ, long distance, and I can relate to this so much. The thought of meeting him gives me butterflies, but Im eager to meet him, and see if what we feel is true, you know?
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10/10
This is a good write.Love the flow to it and how very well you you could understand it.well good job again and keep up the great work!
sadie
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