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I'm a hero
You're a villain
I'm a soldier
You're a thief
You left me hanging
Always blaming
With your anger, and your grief
So down with the sinners
And in with the saints
I am neither, but no complaints, no complaints
In the alley sleeping
On the subject weeping
Watch you creeping all around me,
all around me,
all around
He's an artist
She's a hooker
He's a singer
She is a mime
They will never love each other
Their lies've begun to rhyme
CHORUS
I'm a pauper
You're a rich man
But your money
You don't lend
So let's all sing
For ourselves
And find some common ground
Because all we've ever, ever had
Were our poems, and their gentle sound
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More techno slam poetry
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Written July 11th, 2004
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great job.
Very good music, very good words. I would love to see you live an drunkenly laugh, as long as the alcohol is free.
No, really- great lyrics, and the music you put them too is definitely up to the task. Great job. -
Quite an interesting song. I liked the flow to this but the words were confusing to me. the first verse did not seem to fit for me.
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Well sence I can't listen to your songs, I will have to read them!
But I do enjoy them. You are a very talented writer... And Look forward to reading some more of your other poetry...
~Stacey~
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great song! not what I suspected but you really are good. I was wondering how you were going to put this to music but you pulled it off flawlessly!
TF -
Thank you, trust me... I know the feeling. I hope you'll get to see me live one day, and we can joke about it all in drunken irony.
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You rock! I absolutely loved the poem and the music that went with it. As soon as I have the money I really would like to buy your CD... (so unbelievably broke right now) Anyway, just wanted to say that this was incredible.
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hey Horus..... best of luck on this. I have listened to your music... and I like it. Keep on plugging......... and making great songs.
Don -
Click on the link, listen to the song, buy the album. the
album is currently on sale for ONLY five bucks at cd baby.com
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very good
nice -
Did you listen to it?
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This song has interesting structure...I'm not sure where the verses end...or is it just one huge verse and then the chorus? Oh well. Originality is always a good thing. I liked the rhyme in this one. Especially the "off meter" rhyme. That was cool. Thanks for sharing. Til next time...
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It has a great situational set-up.
One of these days, I think I'm going to break down and buy one of your disks.
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Well, it's cinematic that's for sure, not your typical song, more like a movie.
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listening to the mp3...and it's great.
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Tangible, absorbantsuckfacesillysweet
creeping... Watching you creeping all around...
all we've ever ever had...
Fuck, YES! -
brilliant. it sings.
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hehehheeh.. ROCK ON SINNERS.. this made sing-a-long like swivellin' hips himself.. great write hun..
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~GILL~xxx -
gangbox.com/mp3/gangbox.mp3
I would wink if I hadn't traded my eyelids for
vaginal implants.
Edited on Jul 14, 5:36 because ''. -
oh...and ....
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this poem is really good, but you are a worthless slice of yesterday's meatloaf, tossed into the air and smashed to rotten mutt fodder with a ping-pong paddle.
deeeeee deeeee doooooo.
meat on a string
jesus had a fling
with my voodoo queen
and all her tampax dreams were wasted
when my sweet savior creased.
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