I called him on the phone
Just to hear his voice
Though I could not understand
All that he said to me.
I love my little nephew
And he loves me.
She ran and screamed my name,
Jumped into my arms,
So I held her tight
As she gave a wet kiss to me.
I love my little niece
And she loves me.
I came home as I often do.
We chatted for a while
As he caught up on my life.
"I'm proud of you" he suddenly said to me.
I love my dad
And he loves me.
I watched her with the grandchildren
As she taught, instructed and loved.
I realized how she had
Done all that for me.
I love my mom
And she loves me.
I felt so ashamed for what I had done,
So I called my dear friend
To pour out my heart
And he listened to me.
I love my friend
And he loves me.
I went to play on a swing
And I heard a still small whisper
"Just be my child."
For a few moments it was my Father and Me.
I love my Heavenly Father
And he loves me.
Author notes
This is where I pursue happiness - in meaniful relationships. Spending time with those we love is the best thing to do to experience happiness and joy.
Written July 11th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Happiness by plinkyponk.
300 points, ended August 13, 2004, 14 entries
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I agree. There is no better way to pursue love than through meaningful relationships. Mother, Father, children ,friends and God from whom all love comes.
Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it. Sorry, for being so tardy, I've gotten behind on my reading.
Regards,
Leo Long -
this is a very sweet and honest piece. The simple structure beautifully highlights the straight-forward nature of happiness in the people around us... those things right under the nose that we take for granted, but are the real source of joy.
Brian -
this is so lovely, loving and there is an honesty that is felt, here and I remember how much I loved being with my nephews, when they were young and I...well, simply, thank you...it, just, feels so Honest and from your heart and soul...Best to you in the contest...
mi
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Wonderful piece here! the message is truly timeless and I love the form and repetition-very effective. I think this is a winner!
Take Care-TGR (Theresa) -
and I think you have hit the nail on the head with this piece...good luck ....freda
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this is really nice and its a great ending for those who believe in god
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This was such a beautiful tribute to those you love, because you know they love you. Normally I don’t like reading too much repetition, I felt it gave this piece a little extra to it. Nicely written.
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FantabulousHappyMomentsOfLove!!!
So True, the moments worth Living for, are those moments with those ones we Love...Beautiful structure, and words, creating real poetry, and touching our hearts, making all of us remember what, or rather who's more important...thank you for sharing this...take care...Good Luck...God Bless...
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AngelSnot... -
A very simple and great link of thoughts communicated. I really like the succinct way that you came through each relationship in turn, to end with THE important one. If only all people could keep the connection to their spiritual side without condeming what others are doing or how they are finding the same connection. Jesus taught the golden rule, and so few people have the courage to follow it - this was refreshing and straightforward. Thank You.
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Thank you for entering I have read this and will coment when the contest closes
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Beautiful poem! It truly touched me.
Thanks for my review also!
Take Care- TGR -
I think your perspective is well brought out here and you can tell that your happiness lies with your family....great job! byes! Always, Sam
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aw very sweet and lovely.
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Your poem is outstanding. I have a very close family my niece and nephew live next door and my mom lives down the street. I could really identify with you in this poem. Family is a treasure. Queen
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Very heart warming
You are lucky to have so many to love in your life.
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These are all based on actual true experiences and come straight from my heart. Thanks for the comment.
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i think your perspective in this poem is amazing! Great job on this write
keep it up
keep writing
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Thank you very much.
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You have a great outlook and a great idea on what is most important in this life. Never lose that perspective my friend. This was very uplifting and inspiring. Pieces like this leave me feeling refreshed. Thanks!
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