Bright as a shining star...
Don't forget who your are.
For you are one of mine..
Don't fall for the enemy's line.
as the night falls
and the stars shine bright
you rise
as a different person
you used to have a meaning
and now you don't
you have forgotten
who you *where*
Author notes
i think this one may join on to the one about my cat as wen i had lost her i forgot who i was i wasnt the same as i used to be *hannah* but i was like someone diferent everytime someone came near i flinched i do not know why but i wasnt the same
Written July 11th, 2004
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A nice, short poem. You say a nine year old helped?
Also, realize the last word is where, as opposed to were, the past tense form of are. -
good poem, though the text is hard to read ^_^. i think you did a good job. it just seems to have a good feel to it.
~later -
Good poem but i cant be bothered to leave a long comment but you love me so much you dont mind chicken lol good poem here thanks for sharing
Rowena Jo -
hello people my 9 year old cousin helped me write this and i love it it is my fave and also i like my 1 about the cat and the night one
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