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The Long Way Home

Dedicated to Johnathan Jason Woodward


A new friend has taught me
Not to have too much pride
And you will feel more humble
Feel such happiness inside

He says God loves everyone
That God's son died for me
God must be a great man
How I hope some day I see

Will it be a dep felt feeling
Will there be  some kind sign
Or will I hear God's sweet call
As I wait there here in line

God must be so very busy
For He does so very much
When and where will I find God
And when will I feel his touch

Thank you my dear friend
For lending me your ear
And for letting me know
No matter what, God does care



 

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Written July 10th, 2004

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  • live4eternity
    July 10, 2004
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    Making me cry

    Oh Our God. This is completley beautiful. You MUST tell me who, cause you know what I am thinking. The messeges that we shared... If I am right... man o man. WOW, how you long to see this person, they have helped you more than they know! I met a man on the net, and we finnaly met! I was there for him when he needed a friend. It took me three hours to drive, I had to be there because his son was no longer alive... we help eachother more than we know by letting God use us as a tool! What a wonderful dedication, and the person you dedicated this to must feel sooo privlidged and blessed! You HAVE to tell me if it is who I think it is!

  • Honeydew
    July 10, 2004
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    What a lovely dedication to your new friend,and yes ,god does care.a very lovely write