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The Long Way Home

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Dedicated to a new friend


A new friend has taught me.
Don't have too much pride.
You'll feel more humble.
And feel happiness inside.
He says God loves everyone.
God's son died for me.
God must be a great man.
Hope some day I see.
Will it be a feeling?
Will there be a sign?
Will I hear God's call.
As I wait in line.
He must be very busy.
He does so very much.
Where will I find God.
Will I feel his touch.
My heart tells me yes.
My mind tells me no.
All my life not knowing.
Where I want to go.
Thank you my friend.
For lending an ear.
And for letting me know.
No matter what, God does care.

THANK YOU

 

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Written July 10th, 2004

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  • live4eternity
    July 10, 2004
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    Making me cry

    Oh Our God. This is completley beautiful. You MUST tell me who, cause you know what I am thinking. The messeges that we shared... If I am right... man o man. WOW, how you long to see this person, they have helped you more than they know! I met a man on the net, and we finnaly met! I was there for him when he needed a friend. It took me three hours to drive, I had to be there because his son was no longer alive... we help eachother more than we know by letting God use us as a tool! What a wonderful dedication, and the person you dedicated this to must feel sooo privlidged and blessed! You HAVE to tell me if it is who I think it is!
  • Honeydew
    July 10, 2004
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    What a lovely dedication to your new friend,and yes ,god does care.a very lovely write