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What Happen To Us?


Before we would talk on the phone for hours,Talking about nothing.
Every time we where with each other nothing but smiles showed.
There was so much for us.
Then We Ended,
You Started dating my friend.
Then there where hardly phone calls,Only to ask for something.
When we where with each other nothing but thoughts and frowns.
Now there is hardly of us left.
Now We hang out,
All we do is, Hug when we say Hello
And Hug When we Say Goodbye.
What Happen to us?
This is not what i thought would happen.
But i promised to love you forever
And i don't break my promise,
So if loving you is all thats left of us.
Then Forever i will.
What Happen to us?

Author notes

This is to Bobby.Hopefully he wont read this,I dunno what he'll think.But Its Just Asking what Happen?Cause we hang out alot but where never where like we where before.Its Very Confusing this is just how i felt.
Written July 10th, 2004

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  • Princess2006
    February 14, 2005
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    I loved reading it but it was really sad. I feel so bad for you. Great write tho. Keep up the awsome work.
    God Bless,
    Kate


  • Chrissy626
    January 29, 2005
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    i love this!!! great job!!! you should enter it in a contest, because it is sure a winner!! Great job and well done!!


  • November 21, 2004
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    I have felt this way last year with my boyfriend marshall...but everything got a lot better after awhile and now we are back together. Good poem and keep writing.

  • rain031
    August 12, 2004
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    I have definately felt like that before, so I can definately relate in one way or another. Good job expressing yourself though. There is a lot of honesty behind your words. I hope everything works out with you and him. Good write! Keep it up!

    Rachel


  • July 17, 2004
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    ::sniffle::

    ::sniffle:: Aww....mia...you should tell him this kinda stuff. You wrote this in July so thats like a few months after you broke up. I didn't even know u still liked him or anything. This is good, you shouldn't hope that he doesn't read it. Well, call me soon, tata love, lol

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