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Drift

You lived a troubled life
couldn't take it anymore
you'll cut an artery or two
let out all the pain
close your eyes
your drifting away
all your pain is spilling out
and you leaving this world
without any regrets
you enter eternal rest

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Written July 10th, 2004

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  • July 17, 2004
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    tears, it's so sad.

  • Cwm
    July 10, 2004
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    Very sad...write...it's true but ashamed many decide to take that route...