All my life I knew something was missing out of my life
Never knew what it was, only knew I had to find it.
I searched and searched, what is it? Where is it?
Others I met along the way, knowing it’s not them
Feeling incomplete, something was missing!
When I became ill, the doctor would say
“describe how you feel, what are the symptoms?”
my symptoms apart from the heart!
I feel like my blood is rushing through my veins
A tingling feeling through my body, my head.
“those feelings you describe are not from your heart”
Still I felt them, Oh tell me what it is I am feeling?
Two years went past, my heart was still beating
But the feelings still came.
Others I met, connected to, but not that feeling!
Until one day we met on the net by chance
OH that feeling, it is here, it is you!
You are what I have looked for all my life.
Such a love I have never felt, you felt it too!
Feelings we felt beyond description,
Always connected we will be, no matter what
I feel you, I love you, beyond any other.
ALWAYS WILL.
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Written July 10th, 2004
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I've been going arounf reading the oldest item posted by people on my fav list...yes I know...I'm weird.
I know something about the distance thing, becoming an expert actually.
I also know the feeling of finding a soulmate...and also of finding out that the soulmate wasn't a soulmate, lol...so I no longer know what a soulmate is... What I do know are those feelings and I guess with any luck I'm on my way to once again believing in that notion of soulmates. 
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this is awesome, i could relate to this and i hate how it takes suck a long time to find out what your feeling. your so talented keep it up
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This was wonderful Jenn. Sorry I didnt read it before.
Love Mia
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Wonderful!!!
An interesting read. to feel some one far away is special power not many have.
Congrats, Jennifer.
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Jen..Wow beatifull very passionate poem to your love..im really hoping he will come back..
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ui have reasd this b4 i like it so much jenni i do so pleasing when it come to.. well fien i am coool this is so .. wel am in sch runing a foundation programe ok
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Heart felt love
such a passionate poem filled with such love. I am amazed but such passion and love. Your heart is so pure, and it shows in your writting. I am so glad you won the contest with this poem. It has a heart felt emotion within it -
This is such a beautiful piece. It gives hope to the lonely and comfort to my heart. Such a tender and loving write.
Congrats on the win, well deserved.
Sam
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Hi Jennifer
I can sense your happiness in this poem Well, I wish you the very best with your new love. Good job with writing this, and thank you for entering my contest.
Take Care
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Thank you Vic for your lovely comment, it is not too long my friend, it is wonderful and I love it. Never give up hope my young friend anything is possible if you truly believe
Jennifer
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5 stars *****
woah dear jennifer.. i mean wow dear jennifer...
.. this is great poem.. nah not only great it is fantastic poem... just let me inform you the reason why i liked it.. it is coz i can relate.. 
... i met christina through net... and now it has been 6 months since we have been talking to each other.. she lives in romania.. i live in india.. it is thus for sure i aint gonna meet her any day.... i cant say whats our relation( i dunno what to say about it ) .. but than believe me.. she is the first girl ever on whom i had a crush.. lol.. thank you very much for writing such a grrreat poem.. and EXTREMELY SORRY FOR SUCH A LONG COMMENT.. 
.. anyways.. take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.... just keep it up dear jennifer .. your humble little friend... 
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.... - vic
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Thank you for your congratulations, I was very happy when I found I had won-Jenny
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Thank you for the congratulations, I appreciate it-jennifer
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thank you abdul for your congratulations, you will learn my friend, it takes time-Jenny
I don't give my email address out, especially if I don't know anyone very well-Jenni
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you derser the medal ok we are still learning that why i said before that u are perfect
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Very well done jennifer! This was a lovely piece whith much emotion. Congratulations on your win
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well done for getting gold! well deserved! Thanks for the comment on my poem that won silver
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Thank you soooo much, oh I am sooo excited, thank you, thank you, thank you Gabz, my first trophy.this is soo wonderful
Jenni
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Oh I LOVED THIS!!!!! It was soo great. First goes to you my friend!!!
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nice u look at my home page again well am fine u kno so wher is the guy from well can i reach u kno through ur mail
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no, I thought you were from where he comes from, but I checked your site and I altered it in my comment, he is from another country
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u mean the guy is from nigeria
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Thank you abdulrahman, he is the love of my life, but we can never be together, he also comes from another country and feels the same way so we correspond only-Jenni
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my symptoms apart from the heart!
I feel like my blood is rushing through my veins
A tingling feeling through my body, my head.
“those feelings you describe are not from your heart”
Still I felt them, Oh tell me what it is I am feeling?
Two years went past, my heart was fixed
this is nice perfect poem -
wonderfully written
Dear Jennifer, I see you too have a very deep love for someone? it's a very beautiful poem you have written, full also of emotions, thank you for commenting on mine, Sally -
Thank you my friend, I am happy just knowing you feel it was deserving of first place. You made good choices in the winners.
's and 'S Jenni
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if it wasnt for babymya u would have gotten first place......iprinted this poem out to show......u should make writing a profession! ty for entering
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this poem was something needed after some of the other depressing angst poems.....ur words are very good..u will make it hard to choose....
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Thank you Tonya for your kind words-jenni
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Great write!!! I liked it alot.. Good job and God bless.
~tonya~
p.s.)Welcome To AP!!
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