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I Won't Forget You

What can I say?
You're not here.
No one to Love.
No one to care for.
what did you go?
The pain is still here.
It won't leave me.
Did you think
I'd just forget you?
I can't!
I'm sorry to say.
Tears are rolling down on my face.
I look for you,
but you're not here.
Why did you go?
Was it something I said?
Or was it something I did?
I'll make it up,
If you'll just come back.
But that's just a dream.
You're gone.
But I won't forget you.

Jan. 7, 1981

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Written July 9th, 2004

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  • Shahvana
    July 28, 2004
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    This is really moving, i could sense alot of pain in this poem, also u expressed urself well! losing someone is awful so this i can relate to which is great! nice job!


  • Ember Rose
    July 16, 2004
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    Though I know you wrote this piece some time ago, the reader can still see the intensity of pain and longing within the prose. Hope by now, you are over her. If not, maybe you can find some comfort in my piece: http://allpoetry.com/poem/720302
    your friend, Rose

  • song bird1203
    July 9, 2004
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    I admit when I say the title I pictued bret micheals and C.C. Deville but it is a great poem.