A Silken Tie
A silken tie to bind her hands above her head.
Her body responds to everything He said.
His hands bring a bright blushing red to her ass,
With each of His well-placed smacks.
She moans,
He groans,
She desires,
He provides.
A silken blindfold deprives her of sight.
Her body embraces a whole new fright.
His sweet whispers in her ear,
Let her know she has nothing to fear.
She moans,
He groans,
She desires,
He provides.
A silken cord encircles her heart,
Her body responds allowing no other, a part.
His heart attached to the opposite end,
Allows Him to show her just how much she can bend.
She moans,
He groans,
She desires,
He provides.
She wears His collar out of love,
She feels like His angel sent from above.
He holds her in His arms,
Keeping her safe from any harm.
They moan together.
They groan together.
They desire each other.
They provide each other.
Author notes
This is how a D/s relationship works...I took this as a challenge and I think I've done ok with it.
Written July 9th, 2004
A contest entry
- s & m by Forgotten Lilith.
300 points, ended July 26, 2004, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Starla,
Came looking to see if you had anything new, and stumbled on this.
My oh my....(blushing)....what a very sensual read. I really liked how you did this. The repeated verse was very helpful in bringing the reader back to what the poem was about, and in this case, it was important. The flow was very good. Great job with this poem.
Cheryl
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Thank you Preston for your compliment and wishing me luck in the contest...looks like I'll need it.
Best Wishes,Starla -
Thanks goth I appreciate your comments.
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oh hell yeah this is a bad ass piece
great job on writting it and good luck in the contest
~Preston~ -
9.5/10
ooooh hee hee....i like this one
my fav line:
A silken blindfold deprives her of sight.
Her body embraces a whole new fright.
His sweet whispers in her ear,
Let her know she has nothing to fear.
i like the creativity in your words...there is so much more to your poem than just sex...this is the kind of poem that could be read over and over again but always a new emotion appears (bookmarks lol) -
LOL thank you. I appreciate your comments. Best Wishes,Starla
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Hey spankee; not bad.
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Great write
Wow, this is really good Starla. The flow and emotion of this piece is amazing. I loved the repetition of:
'She moans,
He groans,
She desires,
He provides'
Thats awesome. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work!!!
...cherie...
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