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where i am

I'm dead.
Floating in a dark void.
No one else is here,
I'm alone.
As if I'm the only one who ever existed,
But I know I'm not,I remember them...the people I mean.
When I was still alive there were people all around me,
and I felt loved....I think,Its getting harder to remember things.
I'm starting to forget everything I ever knew.
I feel nothing here,
Not hope,joy,sadness or even pain.
Just scared and lonely.
It's not Heaven or Hell,I'm just here,
in this place,for eternity.

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Written July 9th, 2004

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