Wake up generation!
Give a standing ovation
to the Creator of Nations.
Rise up on the foundations
and shout the proclamation
proclaiming to the world's federations
that we need no explanation
or clarification,
only faith in His creation,
His declaration,
His identification
that gives eternal gratification.
Author notes
I thought about this while i was in the shower....and i had to write it lol
Written July 8th, 2004
A contest entry
- Bible Bashing. Oh Come all ye Faithful. by ----michael----.
400 points, ended April 15, 2005, 25 entries
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I like that rhyme scheme, very tricky one you are. Good job
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Really good proclaimation to the Lord God, our Creator!!! I like the way it reads and rhymes. I like the fact that it isn't structured, it really words well for this! Well done! ~Melissa♥
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Certainly unique
I really like this. I'm out of clappies for today or you'd be sure to get one. Well done! -
try taking a shower thrice a day, and you will be a great writer.
This was good. I liked it.
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wow...this is really good....it has great meaning....everyone needs to thank the lord for the great things that he has done.....find a contest for this one...it will go far....you should think in the shower more often....lol...great write
*punky
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