The monster was more than I ever could have imagined
Hard, focused, centered -- a real take control hulking beast
From that moment when his calloused hand first caressed
my supple breast; I knew I was in for a firm but necessary
spanking. He took me downstairs to his dungeon.
He showed me things that sent my mind reeling
Dark-dainty-fine-tailored attachments, and gilded harnesses
Sticks and waxes, fire and tacks, undergarments with no backs,
and a wheel that spun in real-time.
I pulled at the monster's trousers unleashing built up steam,
and with a patient hand guided out his fleshy beam, it
flexed with a veiney gleam. He spun me around, and walked me
to the wall. He tore off my new knickers with one swipe of his
paw. He bent me at the waist, and found his way inside,
and banged my head against the bricks until I had no pride.
The monster came with mighty squirts.
The monster came with glee
Then he pulled it out, and spun me around
with fresh dexterity.
And said with all regal zen "Now that I've turned you out,
let's check your dental records, and see what that's about?"
And since I was a professional; from beyond the great plateau
I showed him my impression of the Monica Lewinsky show.
Author notes
Written July 8th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Fever Dreams [ Contest ] by Odyssey.
350 points, ended July 21, 2004, 14 entries
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As much as you have classed it as "erotica" it is dripping with what I know of your tongue in cheek humor. Entertaining, to say the very least. Thanks so much for entering, much appreciated.
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Well it ran like a bloody steam train.. hehehheh building up heat as it went.. great piece hun.. DAMN YOU!!! lololololol mine is paled into the shadows now..
~GILL~xxx -
you know, since ima bgirl, it kinda fits...and itmakes more sense since you've written it in first person narrative...therefore, it kinda applise to everyone
holy crap...spelling mistakes. 1 too many corona.
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Good write, very good imagery. Keep up the good work there.
-EncasedInAsh -
Oh my gosh, this was freaking hilarious. I really hope you get something outta the contest you entered, because this poem was great.. awesome job!
~ lost love
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