love breathes
or, at least she does
i can feel the breath
on my face as we
fall together
toward one-another
been waiting a long time for this
when i hear her lips and tongue
vibrate with mine
the kiss, smooth as wine
tells me she loves me
i love you too,
i tell her with my eyes,
and she knows
the smell of her cheek
the smoothness of her teeth
the taste of our kiss
the beauty of our midnight sun
the day of our tomorrow
will forever be in my dreams of you
it's like drinking heaven,
kissing her
and the ocean in my soul
overflows with her
breathing love
Author notes
thanks again for reading
Written July 8th, 2004
A contest entry
- xXBoyz OnlyXx by Ms Raneika.
300 points, ended March 13, 2005, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Great Write excellent and very well-written poem thanks for entering my contest***
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awww. im so happy for you guys.
Im glad that you joined ap, whee but anyway. this is a very good poem indeed.
dunno what else to say besides im happy for you ^^.
oh and ian mommy, no more goingn out of the house drunk, ya hurrd?
lol
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This is a very sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing it.
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Oh.. wow. This was THE most beautiful poem I have ever read. I love you too. Tears of love for you dripped out of my eyes when I read this. Thank you... thank you so much for this. Write more. BYE!
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