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50 thousand tears

50 thousand tears I’ve cried

50 thousand tears I’ve cried
Related to those times you lied
What goes on in your mind?
Do you think you’re kind?
Friendship wounds can’t just heal
These problems are real
Don’t brush them away
They won’t disappear
I never strayed
I was always by your side
How can our friendship have died?
I don’t understand
I’m not part of your designer friendship brand
You said you forgot
But it was more like lets not
And off you would trot
In your mind we could be left to rot
I’m sorry I’m not what you like

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Written July 8th, 2004

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  • angelic misha
    July 23, 2004
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    Truly fantastic! I really like that poem! You are so good at writing poems girl!

  • Jaffa
    July 12, 2004
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    Fab

    I love this poem! its one of my favourite poems! and its so easy to relate too and so incredibly moving! its addictive! and its among the best pieces you've written!

  • shared whispers
    July 9, 2004
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    cool poem. i dont really no wot to say except that it is great. keep writing.
    shannon


  • Stac
    July 8, 2004
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    nice job..i think everyone can relate to this in some way at one point in ther lives..i liked it a lot..keep writing ..
    STAC

  • numbhart09
    July 8, 2004
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    i really liked this, it reminds me of me and my old friends relationship, great job on the write and i hope things turn out better for you.

    best wishes
    Brittany

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