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my life

Pain
Light
Cold
Crying
I'm Being born
Love
Hate
Joy
Sadness
I'm living
Scared
Tired
Darkness
Peace
I'm Dieing


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Written July 8th, 2004

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  • kalifornia
    July 8, 2004
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    puts the right message of life. on edge