open windows
summer sounds waft
warmth...
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Written July 7th, 2004
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A very beautiful Haiku Susan... But in my part of the world.... Summer is helish! lol! But according to your country, I know it is a merry time! Keep writing! its a pleasure reading your work~ 
Lonely~
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I think the other seasons are jealous!
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A few simple words , yet they say so much that I can feel it
Reenie
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Beautifully worded Susan
I love it! Very nuce hun.
Cindy
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ahhh...nice susan!
i note that your woman is outside the open window!
have my window partially open right now...can hear someone mowing their lawn somewhere...kind of early for a saturday morning! just heard some rustling in the undergrowth, and then saw one of the cats mrs. g. feeds. the other night saw a momma racoon and her babies walking by. who needs to go out? rats, i do...forgot to get mrs. g her diet coke yesterday. yes, i know i'm rambling sis. shutting up now.
loved the poem and pic, lots of hugs to you!
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Very nice you captured the refreshment in few words well done Love,Sherry
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Ahh summer, being able to open the windows and let that fresh, warm air inside. Nice simple write. Reminds me a bit a spring too.
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beautiful....that says it all...freda
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Susan
This is a very beautiful haiku, with a gorgeous picture
Hugs and Love
Karen
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Excellent.
Very nice. I still like haiku. It seems like something so short should get old, but it doesn't. This is a great summer poem. It just kind of makes you feel that way... the way you're supposed to at summertime. -
Enjoyed your haiku and the pic' (wondering why I haven't heard from you).
How are you doing, Sis?
Love and hugs,
<3 Maureen
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very refreshing!
great write!
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Ah, this is such a beautiful word painting of summer. A perfect tribute to a lovely month. Great job! And the picture you have before it is GORGEOUS. take care -mary/nevaeh
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Dear Susan,
Hmmm. Unusual 3/4/1 scheme but beautifully expre4ssive and it wouldn't have the impact if there were any more syllables or words. I love it and applaud it.
Glad to sense that you are feeling better these days. Keep it up as I do my prayers for you, sweetheart.
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
Edited on Jul 08, 6:02 p.m. because 'Who closed the window?'. -
Lovely
Hi Susan:
And if you live in Houston, the buzzzzz of mesquitos all night long to help you through the night. No open windows for this part of the world, if I can help it. Lovely Haiku though. Thanks for sharing the Haiku and the picture. Bill -
excellent
THis was a verysweet haiku, but summer at my place is hellish.. LOL! the warmth may bring sun burn... LOL! ok never mind.. This haiku was superb.. I'm, gonna read more of your stuff.. I was guided to your page by Sally!
Love,
Lonely~
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A beautiful Haiku, Susan And a beautiful picture to compliment it.
I really like this piece. Great job
luv and
Dee
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Thanks so much you all for the kind comment
It is most appreciated
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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Ah, a beautiful haiku!
It reminded me of my old apartment in Santa Monica. It was a a few blocks from the beach and I used to love to sit in front of the window and hear the revelers on the beach, feel the breeze and watch the sun set over the Pacific. Thanks for taking me back!
Mark -
Enchanting!so warmingly enchanting!
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Isn't it wonderful when the warm weather comes
Here in Maine it's so cold for so many months
That i just love when summer comes so i can open
up all the windows first thing in the morning
and let the air and the sound of the birds
come on it.. It's such a blessing
~Wonderful Haiku Sweet Lady Moon ~
~Tomorrow is another beautiful day just waiting to begin~
Love to you Sweety Always ~
Mina xox
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This sounds very familiar sis...lol. Very good haiku...if I do say so myself. Feeling a nice summer breeze coming through. Very well done!
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Aliteration, nice. I haven't tried haiku's since I was a child, I should some time. Good work.
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